You've put me down one too many times
So i think it's about that time i put my feelings into rhymes
You've let my spirits die so many times it hurts
If you felt how i felt, then reality would be vice-versed
I probably made up a new word, who knows?
But you should tell me how this next promise will be ruined and how it goes
If it dies just like our relationship did
You remember that Daddy, back when i was a kid?
When you left me and Mommy when i became a certain age
And how it leads up to now, why I'm filled with so much rage
In our relationship you tried to engage
Would that really be successful, or should i turn another page?
Of life of course, is there a feeling of remorse?
'Cause i can turn over leaves, and construct a new course
Is that what you want?
Do you feel any type of way?
For every promise you break, i should make you pay
It'll add up every bit of cents you owe
All that money in child support, it may make you grow
Not as a person, but maybe as a daddy
If you never really wanted me, you never should've had me
Does this bother you much, or do you even bother?
Because you never meant well, not even as my father...
Sunday, July 4, 2010
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WOW your really good at writing rhymes ;) and i can totally relate to the whole dad subject, he's never been there and I dont get why bother with having kids if you cant commit x
ReplyDeleteLove this you have a gift for writing rhymes, and I love how your write about things that people can relate to. I get the whole dad issues x
ReplyDeleteThank you very much. I always thought i sucked at writing rhymes, but now it's kinda my thing to pass time when i'm mad or feeling any type of way. But i thank you and i really appreciate it. =D
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